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Without You

My life is cold and brittle without you... Emptiness is all I feel, and darkness, all I see... You are my days, nights, and dreams... You are everything I ever wanted to be... You are my air... My food... My water... My only prayer... You introduced me to my heart... You let me taste God... You brought out my best, and crushed the facade... There is no one else that can fill this void... Without you, all hope is destroyed...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/6/2012 3:41:00 PM
Really good one, darrell. BIG congrats on the win.
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Date: 9/6/2012 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Darrell xx
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:13:00 PM
Darrell , congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. Enjoyed all winners.. xox~pd
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Date: 9/5/2012 3:54:00 PM
Heartfelt write Darrell. Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Darrell. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 6:07:00 PM
DARRELL, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2012 12:39:00 PM
Aw, That's sad :( I like it though :) Thanks for sharing.
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