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Without Love

As my heart falls deeper, your soul cries. For me, the echoes are silence. Our deep love is frayed. My soft heart descends into your loving soul. Forever sorrow is gone, all shadows of loneliness fade. To nevermore be without love. created by johnaarongreen

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 7/6/2014 8:29:00 PM

A moving and sentimental write. I could feel your emotions pour down the page as I read this. Very nicely done! Hi, how have you been?

Cory Long

Date: 10/18/2012 8:03:00 PM

this was beautiful and every line holds such power.. Where did you go my friend? I miss talking to you Cory

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/13/2012 3:19:00 PM

How and where are you John? Is life treating you well and I'm wondering what happened to you!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/8/2012 8:00:00 AM

This is very sweet. I love each line, John.

Deborah Burch

Date: 6/7/2012 8:36:00 PM

I have greatly enjoyed reading your works...amazingly tender and heartfelt...some wonderfully deep...all resonating God's enduring and sustaining love...thank you for visiting me...I am greatful ...hugs,deb

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/7/2012 7:22:00 PM

Such tenderness John, a shortwork of art to touch my soul. So wonderful to have you with us again! Love, Elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2012 5:00:00 PM

John, sometimes I think my life would be better without the love.. But, like your ending i can't accept such a life.. xox.. pd

Dan Kearley

Date: 6/4/2012 1:04:00 AM

I hope you found the love John...X-celent write! :-)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/3/2012 12:45:00 PM

HHMMMmmm! Get that pen a'writin, youngin'! Don't keep your fans waiting out here in the cold! G.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 6/1/2012 7:06:00 AM

Dear John , This is sad and joyful at the same time. Great to see you here again,missed you.For me loneliness and sorrow are with me every moment even though I'm trying to live each minute without him.Everyone says It will get easier, wish it would start soon.'To nevermore be without love' Great line!!! Your friend ,Anne

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/31/2012 10:40:00 PM

Such an invigorating poem, Jon. Knowing the background, it brings me great tears of joy! Have you ever you tubed" Healing Rain" by Michael W. Smith? Will u watch it and tell me whatcha think?...God's healing rain has really helped me in gigantic ways! I am forever thankful! :) Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song
Date: 6/4/2012 3:49:00 PM