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Without An Answer

im without an answer there is nothning to say the words that i speak wont make it ok the maybe's are gone there is no more "ill change" we just stare at eachother as if the other is strange the sillence is deep there is no sound but our breathing the air rushing in the the air quietly leaving the ticks from the clock and its slow steady pace brings a small little frown apon her lovely face she then goes to speak but changes her mind the words on her lips but suddenly declined a chill in the room a quick frosty breeze brings her arms from her side and placed on her knees i stand and i stretch my body is aching did she just smile or was i mistaken? the dog rasies his head then he jumps off the chair as if all the tension is to much to bare i guess this is it then i guess we are now done the love has now vanished like the soon setting sun i walk to the door with a tear in my eye im to choked to speak so i wisper goodbye i unlock the door i just cannot beleive and as i close it behind me she screams "please do not leave"

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Date: 10/25/2012 1:20:00 PM
I love every line of this poem. Awesome!
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Date: 7/18/2012 3:49:00 AM
Nicely done Simon! I love the ending - it was quite unsuspected following the suspense.
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