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Within My Heart

In the winter nights cold frost nipping at my skin
Its not as cold as the heart within
Mistrust and betrayal
A thousand questions answered with a million lies
I trusted those words
Then I was left to Die
Stupid heart I want to scream
Stupid girl I was left to bleed
Can I ever trust again? 
Ever know that my heart has found a true friend
Broken and betrayed
Slashed and cut apart
These are the feelings
The Fears within my Heart

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 12:23:00 PM
    resist that terrible White Flag and all it's invites, it is a liar - stomp on It all the way to your glory's end my friend - Whatever it takes Jay - no surrender to Pain - another powerful write, keep given'em to me - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 12:18:00 PM
    Thanks so much for the special glimpse Jay - its like this babe, either you're gonna live your life like a Goddess, or like a wretch, perhaps oscillating between the two - there have been many before you whom have fought the Pain, and succeeded despite becoming muddied; there are many more who had your potential and surrendered calmly and sadly to It - you've got the spark of the First Goddess in your heart, don't fail It -

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 3:20:00 PM
    Beautiful Jay - I love the clouds that billow and thin in the sky of self analysis - we just need to try our best to avoid self deception - its hard - J.A.B. %