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Within Her Breath

Within Her Breath I heard upon the desert wind, a song that sounds so sweet. It lives within this dry parched land, that lays beneath my feet It grows within the desert palm, and shines within its sun. A song that reaches deep inside, that’s not for everyone. A song I see in eyes so bright, and in that flowing hair. A song that creeps into the heart, and rides the desert air. For if I stop and feel the wind, I know that I will hear. The softness of your bated breath, as I am drawing near. I’ll hear your passion on the wind, and touch your gentle hand. I’ll ride between those swaying palms, upon the desert sand. For I will pick the fruit of love, that lives within the palm. And hear within your gentle breath, a loving desert psalm. by Tom Clark

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Date: 1/22/2010 12:44:00 PM
very beautiful, very well deserved win!! Congrats!!
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Date: 1/21/2010 7:51:00 PM
This is so beautiful. Congratulations on your win. This goes in my favs. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 1/21/2010 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations Tom, on your success in Deborah Guzzi’s, “Who Loves Ya Baby” contest with this very romantic and well written heartfelt poem. It's easy to see why you won 1st place. Your poetic skills shine brightly. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/13/2010 2:45:00 PM
Very beautiful and no wonder you won! Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/13/2010 9:56:00 AM
This is one of the most beauiful poems I've ever read! The target of such emotion is a lucky person indeed. Congratulations. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 1/13/2010 6:12:00 AM
Tom - Many congratulations on your very deserving first place. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/12/2010 2:51:00 PM
That is such a beautiful poem Tom. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/12/2010 12:09:00 PM
Breath-taking! Congratulations on this winning poem....1st place Hooray for you! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/12/2010 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your most worthy win. A true love song. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/12/2010 9:05:00 AM
My sincere congratulations on your win. A gorgeous write indeed! Caroline.
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Date: 1/12/2010 8:20:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAh So beautifully passionate. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win. Tom. Lainie
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Date: 1/7/2010 5:15:00 PM
I have sand in my ears after reading this one.........................very good , well done!
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Date: 1/5/2010 2:01:00 PM
Hi there I am SO glad to find your lovely verses! Please note in 4th quatrain you want the word bated..not baited..yes? It's one of the best verse I have recieved so far. Light & Love
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Date: 1/5/2010 8:19:00 AM
This seems like beautiful lyrics to a wonderful love song. (I can ammost hear the music!) ~ Nicely done, Carrie
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