Within

Within the mind a woven tapestry Of joy, a pink cotton candy sunset A memory of sunsets fancy free Can't duplicate, nor memory forget Come go into a pink sunset with me Each day let it be blessed gift received A memory shared as long as life we see Enjoy each sunset and cherish with greed Slowly walk into the cotton candy sunset Spend its minutes together close as can be Unraveling past mistakes _all forget Forward_ filled with peace for eternity Within the woven tapestry pattern Let beauty in the end only pattern discern Finis'

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2013 6:18:00 PM

stopping by this one again... was hoping it was completed by now... you left it with interesting imagery...Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2013 5:37:00 PM

sounds good enough to eat. I think that is why we call it eye candy!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2013 5:54:00 PM

Sara please do tell when this one is complete.... I know it's gonna be good... You got pink cotton candy sunset... haha..that's one of the best imagery's ever... love..Linda

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/2/2013 11:08:00 AM

Very interesting thought you penned here wonderfully, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/1/2013 4:53:00 PM

Looking forward to reading the finished sonnet, you've started it off magnificently, Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/1/2013 10:14:00 AM

i'm getting high already, sara.. will get back to this when done... simply tremendous!..:) huggs