With Eyes of Dusk

He gently looks at me with dusky sighs
Although he’s bared my soul a hundred times
Those deepened eyes unfold to memorize
All captive thrills releasing moans , sublime.

His eyes are twilight’s song in waves of haze
Exploring hunger’s thirst, a moistened glade
And every movement sets the stars, ablaze
To grasp the blooming rise of tunes replayed.

A mounted flavor climbs, and I’m complete
With glow , to open mouth of eve-song’s  fire 
Inside one breath, our tender glances heat, 
Disrobing this and that, moonbeams conspire.

Those dusky eyes anoint my fluid skin
As ripples of chaste love tremble within.



Any Subject, Any Form--New Poem Contest
Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/20/2013 8:11:00 PM
well done...PD
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Date: 11/18/2013 6:15:00 PM
Much much congratulations nette....
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Donna Jones
Date: 11/18/2013 6:16:00 PM
Again.....just had to read it again...
Date: 11/16/2013 7:00:00 AM
My my Nette...leaving me breathless is early morn...congratulations
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Date: 11/16/2013 5:51:00 AM
Ahh, so this was for Charlotte's contest as well! At the top as usual....Not a bit surprised - Tim
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Date: 11/15/2013 7:26:00 PM
Verse two is oooh so splendidly hot, ;)Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/15/2013 7:14:00 PM
Congrats, nette, feel honored to share second place with you!!
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Date: 11/15/2013 5:13:00 PM
I thought this was beautifully sensual, and it was nice to see the emotional content combining with the linguistic fireworks...I noticed the second stanza was an acrostic spelling HEAT - was that intentional? congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 11/13/2013 11:23:00 AM
Holy, holy damn...."tremble within", indeed. My goodness.
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:03:00 PM
Excellent. Very romantic touch, Enjoyed, Tfs
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Date: 11/12/2013 1:07:00 PM
Passionate and very romantic poem by you Nette.Love it!
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:55:00 AM
Hi Nette, Some nice sensual stuff here..I liked this one.. Ken
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Date: 11/12/2013 10:12:00 AM
Excellently passionate poem you've penned my dear friend Nette. Another stunning write again of one of my fave poets. So love and enjoyed reading it tonight. By the way, hope you're doing fine always with your family & so with our dear Nicko & her family. I'm so grateful my family were fine too. Hope Zoraida will change her path & spare our country.:(( So sad that another typhoon is coming. Take care always! You're in my thoughts & prayers! Goodnyt. big hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 11/12/2013 7:09:00 AM
Oh mercy me Nette, here you go raising my blood pressure again...I always said Charma was the 'Queen of Romance' here on the Soup but you are running a close second! Exotic, erotic and elegant...I heard about the Typhoon...are you okay? - Tim
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Date: 11/11/2013 5:41:00 PM
Wow Nette, you have left me spellbound with this incredible write my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this delightful piece, put me in awe of the power of this amazing poem! What a glorious piece, this is such a tremendous write, Great Work!!
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Russell Sivey
Date: 11/11/2013 5:45:00 PM
Oh btw, I got your Soupy, I made a mistake in writing that one, I believe I had a second version that was supposed to go out into the contest, but it must have never made it. Sorry about that, my fault my friend, I made a mistake!
Date: 11/11/2013 1:54:00 PM
Passionate contest entry..Enjoyed reading your creative lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that you are fine..Sara
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Date: 11/11/2013 11:39:00 AM
Hauntingly wonderful, emotions expressed within every line and stansa, Love it. Thank you for your commits on the emotional divids. cheri done
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Date: 11/11/2013 11:38:00 AM
- Beautiful & Romantic!! - Always enjoyable to read sweet poems :)))) - Happy thoughts ... happy girls :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/11/2013 11:26:00 AM
I believe you have a gorgeous and very romantic sonnet here! Thanks for your kind words on my poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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