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With a Mind Like a Steel Trap Too

Of COURSE I am not in the least insecure My selfish-image? You bet, peerless and pure Negative thoughts I avoid Paranoia? Null and void But you were talking and pointing I am sure… For Susan’s contest

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Carol Eastman

Date: 9/29/2013 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Good one...

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/11/2013 7:39:00 PM

enjoyed this one,,,,congrats on your win with this great poem :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/10/2013 8:37:00 PM

This is really good. Congrats for the win. hanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/10/2013 7:22:00 PM

(ha ha ha he he ha) ... Timmy, Timmy, I can always count on you to put a smile on my face (that's why I always look for you when I finally get a chance to visit the site ... Your Friend, Moonie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2013 3:52:00 PM

haha self contradiction. Congrats for your win with this witty poem.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/10/2013 8:20:00 AM

Congrats on your win friend tim :) cheers!! :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 9/10/2013 7:38:00 AM

Congrats. Tim-- well done on your deserved win here.

Joseph May

Date: 9/10/2013 6:14:00 AM

congrats on your win ...nicely done

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2013 8:28:00 PM

Hi Tim,, congratulations on your win ~SKAT~ :-)

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/9/2013 6:49:00 PM

I love your wit Tim !! You would mix well with the funny-bones in my family!! Another win, but who is surprised? Not me!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2013 6:30:00 PM

wow...Tim, yup... love the win...Linda

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/9/2013 5:31:00 PM

Good one Tim..perfect , paranoia, Im aquainted with..lol. BG

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/9/2013 4:07:00 PM

Tim, congrats on your 1st place win with this clever limerick! Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2013 3:50:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..I knew it would be..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/9/2013 8:55:00 AM

Love it! Congratulations?

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 9/8/2013 7:21:00 AM

hahahah. I love the wit in your limerick, Tim. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Licia :-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2013 4:33:00 AM

Cute one, Tim..I got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by my winning work with a side of me you had not seen..I was writing senuality about a piece of peppermint candy then I looked at the contest and remember it was suppose to be about the picture then I made a few changes to make it work..Ha!!Ha!! So that was about a peppermint stick..Sara