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Below is the poem entitled wishing which was written by poet Dawn mclaughlin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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If you were wishing
A wish come true
Do have a idea
Where your message
Go's too,
You see how I see it
Don't know if you do too
Not even hands praying
Or eyes tight shut,
Oh I know most want money
You see
Some want a house paid
No worries
But really think deep
Maybe right too the heart
What you never had
I think will never be missed
But if you had riches material you see
Is nothing a rich as a loving family,
I look out today with eyes so wide
Why so much anger and rush
Getting nowhere
Stop slow down
Take a breath
Look all around
See where you stand
If in a material world
Then stay stuck in a mess
For a soul to be happy
For what they have
See what you never had
Will never be missed

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  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:35:00 AM
    A beautiful written poem, Dawn! - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)