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Wishes Do Come True

I pray and I pray That one of my wishes Will one day paves it way Along the path.. There are amends.. There are trials.. There are obstacles.. Yet, still I was given the chance.. Some wished that I shouldn't go.. That I don't deserve it.. It is certainly a grace.. Despite all.. Was given this chance.. All are planned shoot to the moon.. I really hold on.. Hold on tight.. And thank God.. Still, until at this time.. I can not believe.. I was given the chance.. Wishes do come true.. By: olive_eloi 7:06pm 12/05/2013 --------------«««

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Date: 11/19/2014 3:55:00 PM
I'll take you to the moon and back, if you'll be, if you'll be my baby! - great lyric line - Wishes do come true Olive, James :)
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Date: 12/16/2013 4:51:00 PM
Beautiful writing Olive hope your dreams do come true for you. Your soup friend Michael
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Date: 12/12/2013 4:52:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, hope all your dreams will be fulfilled Olive !!! - love this! - Have a great day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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