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Wish I Could Go Back

Never use to like wearing glasses Every since I was a child Now I regret each momment Wish I could take it back It would help me To change my Unhappy And sad Life If I could go back into time I'll care more about my eyes Visit the doctor often Take better care of me My vision is what Should have meant The world To me Pray Lesson well taught and well learned Make sure you take care of yourself Before it is to late Relieve yourself of pain Enjoy your life Live it healthy You only Have but One FOR A JOURNEY BACK INTO TIME CONTEST

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/7/2011 10:31:00 AM

Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Faleshia. I miss you so much. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2010 9:17:00 PM

HI, Faleshia. How are you doing? Congratulations on your win. I remember this enjoyable poem. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/6/2010 11:55:00 AM

wonderful entry , congrats on your win in the contest

John Freeman

Date: 10/5/2010 5:48:00 PM

Faleshia Congratulations on your worthy poem's win in the top 10. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/5/2010 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, faleshia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2010 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations Faleshia on your win in Linda-Marie's contest " A Journey Back In Time". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/5/2010 9:31:00 AM

Congrats Faleshia on your success in my Nonet contest with this excellent entry .. appreciate your constant support always with luv...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2010 10:48:00 PM

Faleshia, you couldn't have changed your eyesight even by seeing a doctor. I am sure you took care of yourself ok. You have a dear spirit. That is what counts! Nice poem on your feelings, Faleshia. LUv, Andrea

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/1/2010 4:06:00 PM

Great poem to go back in time, Faleshia! I am wearing glasses since the age of 16. Nearly lost my left eye when I was a kid when falling onto a sharp stone. I could never wear contact lenses. Have a great time and I wish you best of luck in all contests!...Gert:)

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/30/2010 4:08:00 PM

Love it Faleshia. Things we realise we have done wrong in the past. yet we still plod alone doing it all over again.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/28/2010 5:20:00 PM

Lovely Faleshia.. need two more verses of Nonet to qualify for competition in my contest luv.. enjoyed this first verse...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2010 5:02:00 PM

Very nice entry in the contest , Faleshia. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2010 1:25:00 PM

Good luck in this contest with this prayer request for better vision..Reads like a winner.Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/28/2010 1:20:00 PM

Very nice entry to the contest of Linda, faleshia

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/28/2010 12:47:00 PM

Faleshia, I'm sorry to hear you're having problems with your eyesight. Taking care of health issues is one thing many people would do if they could "Journey Back into Time." I was moved by your plight and will surely pray for you. Thanks for your comments today. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/28/2010 11:05:00 AM

This is a great entry and should do real well in the contest...best of luck Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2010 10:54:00 AM

The best of luck in the contest, Faleshia a nice reason to go back in time. I myself have bad vision, but mine is from all them tears that force-ively made me rub my eyes. How I wish to go back and see it was not worth the eye rub. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.