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Wish I Could Go Back

Never use to like wearing glasses
Every since I was a child
Now I regret each momment
Wish I could take it back
It would help me
To change my
And sad

If I could go back into time
I'll care more about my eyes
Visit the doctor often
Take better care of me
My vision is what
Should have meant
The world 
To me 

Lesson well taught and well learned
Make sure you take care of yourself
Before it is to late
Relieve yourself of pain
Enjoy your life
Live it healthy
You only
Have but


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  1. Date: 4/7/2011 10:31:00 AM
    Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Faleshia. I miss you so much. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/7/2010 9:17:00 PM
    HI, Faleshia. How are you doing? Congratulations on your win. I remember this enjoyable poem. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/6/2010 11:55:00 AM
    wonderful entry , congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 5:48:00 PM
    Faleshia Congratulations on your worthy poem's win in the top 10. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 12:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win, faleshia

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 11:48:00 AM
    Congratulations Faleshia on your win in Linda-Marie's contest " A Journey Back In Time". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 9:31:00 AM
    Congrats Faleshia on your success in my Nonet contest with this excellent entry .. appreciate your constant support always with luv...

  1. Date: 10/2/2010 10:48:00 PM
    Faleshia, you couldn't have changed your eyesight even by seeing a doctor. I am sure you took care of yourself ok. You have a dear spirit. That is what counts! Nice poem on your feelings, Faleshia. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/1/2010 4:06:00 PM
    Great poem to go back in time, Faleshia! I am wearing glasses since the age of 16. Nearly lost my left eye when I was a kid when falling onto a sharp stone. I could never wear contact lenses. Have a great time and I wish you best of luck in all contests!...Gert:)

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 4:08:00 PM
    Love it Faleshia. Things we realise we have done wrong in the past. yet we still plod alone doing it all over again.

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 5:20:00 PM
    Lovely Faleshia.. need two more verses of Nonet to qualify for competition in my contest luv.. enjoyed this first verse...

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 5:02:00 PM
    Very nice entry in the contest , Faleshia. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 1:25:00 PM
    Good luck in this contest with this prayer request for better vision..Reads like a winner.Sara

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 1:20:00 PM
    Very nice entry to the contest of Linda, faleshia

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 12:47:00 PM
    Faleshia, I'm sorry to hear you're having problems with your eyesight. Taking care of health issues is one thing many people would do if they could "Journey Back into Time." I was moved by your plight and will surely pray for you. Thanks for your comments today. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 11:05:00 AM
    This is a great entry and should do real well in the of luck Michael

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 10:54:00 AM
    The best of luck in the contest, Faleshia a nice reason to go back in time. I myself have bad vision, but mine is from all them tears that force-ively made me rub my eyes. How I wish to go back and see it was not worth the eye rub. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.