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Wish Granted in Nine Days

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Wish Granted in Nine Days

Nine days of waiting for the results,
For the good news that I've been dreaming,
To take my vacation for one month,
Wish granted that’s what I've been praying.

The time has come and I’m so happy,
To be away from my busy world,
Take a rest while I still have a chance,
White beaches wait for me…I’m coming!
“Wake up!” It’s 9 o ‘clock! …………Ohhh, A DREAM?

January 19, 2013
For Tracie's Contest "9"
1st Place Winner

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  1. Date: 2/10/2013 7:20:00 PM
    nicely written Maria ;}

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:10:00 PM
    : ) So cute...and funny, Maria! Belated congratulations on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 7:40:00 AM
    White beaches remind me of the white sands of Siesta Key Beach on the west coast of Florida! Twice a year for about 20 years we vacationed there! Hope to get back there at least one more time and not wake up realizing it was a dream! Congrats on your win! LHugs, Jack

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Congrats on your win :D

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Maria - Ralph

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:46:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your top spot Maria luv xx

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 10:09:00 AM
    Hi Maria, , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your big win my dear friend! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:43:00 AM
    Nice one Maria luv, 6 days to my holiday xx

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 4:38:00 PM
    Oh! I was caught up in your dream then the alarm..Great work..If for a contest, should be in the winners' circle..Thanks for your visit to my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:37:00 AM
    I wish for you that it was not a dream, well done Maria. - Good luck in the contest "9". - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)