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Wintry Dawn

May I touch thee beneath a springtide moon with the warming of love's rapture to synchronize our hearts with passion's tune. Might I taste thine lips within summer's seethe: soft and flared of cerise red hue; to quench our pleasures and draw to appease. Embrace thee I shall amongst autumnal rise: leaves aflutter,semblable to hearts; tepid winds breathe upon destiny's devise. Should we ever part from such lovers' bliss; thy pray our love shall never verge. If a day comes to rend us,please remember this: I shall reach thee amidst a wintry dawn, in a pang-chilling memory that no season of other love shall ever thaw.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/1/2009 2:23:00 AM
Love the comparison here. Nicely done love poem. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/30/2009 10:10:00 AM
Hi Eric, Just beautiful, very romantic full of lovely poetic sentiments. Your rhyme in this feels so natural and pure making it a truly amazing write. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Thanks so much for your most welcome comments on Ocean Oasis I truly do appreciate it. Take care, Love Light Truth Patty
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