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Winter's Hold

the wind is chilling the cold makes my spine shiver harsh winter is near the snow has hardened i slip and slide across it now winter is here the blizzard gets worse i cannot feel anything the winter claims me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/11/2009 6:25:00 PM
this weather will be here before you know it...nice write!
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Date: 9/10/2009 4:58:00 AM
Now isn't this just the way it happens to us for sure. Thank you for sharing now I am hibernating Savannah. See you in the Spring. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2009 12:56:00 PM
Sounds cold and scary. Since in the south we are not accustomed to very much snow. I like the way that you put it together. Keep writing. Sara
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