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Winter's Guests

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                                This chill
                                'fore me
                     collides with mine flesh

                               full of life
                            ingenuous life
                         'gainst mine flesh

                     In the wrap of the cabin 
                  with the hearth just kindling
               and our hearts and flesh tingling
                             close 'gainst
                     the rough of mine chest  
                              her breasts

first lovetogethertrue lovefree verse

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Amy Green

Date: 4/3/2014 3:45:00 AM

A reawakening of warmth in winter's chill. You are a grace from an era in time that no longer exists, especially in the male of the species. Oh, if more were like you!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/25/2013 6:01:00 AM

nice , kinda reminds me of my Sweet Ecstasy, you have a great day ;}

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/6/2013 8:43:00 PM

I could tell this is yours without the name, you have that special way of making blood run a bit faster!

Daver Austin

Date: 2/6/2013 9:54:00 AM

Kind of a shivering-hot sensual joy to this one. I like it lots. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2013 4:40:00 PM

Very passionate work..Right now I think that kindling would have to be ignited here for it has turned cold..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that my work was inspiring for you?..Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/1/2013 1:28:00 AM

A very sensual classy poem James.How wonderful to read your poems once Few days ago i asked andrea about you and other poets who stopped writing.I hope you and Noah are doing well James..Charma

James Peranteau
Date: 5/26/2021 7:02:00 PM

*I meant...*winks* Much love, james

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/1/2013 1:41:00 AM

Imeant once again not once:)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/29/2013 6:37:00 PM

Is this what you've been doing in this looooong absence James. How I miss you and these seductive prods by your pen. Yesss, nobody does it like you! Love, Elizabeth