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Winter Wonders (Haiku Number 24)

Small stretch each evening Weeping willows tinged with snow cold airs and graces

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Date: 1/11/2010 1:40:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration and imagery for a creative view. I really like the feel of the opening line. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Keep on writing! Karen

Marty Owens

Date: 1/7/2010 10:07:00 AM

Love your Haiku...I love Weeping Willows...Marty

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/5/2010 1:49:00 PM

Great Haiku, Deirdre! Pretty picture! Peace, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/5/2010 10:56:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Deirdre. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/5/2010 2:31:00 AM

At 24 , my Winter wonders , will she write some more ???? Clever , clever line : " cold airs and graces " .......!!!!!..

David Byrne

Date: 1/4/2010 11:07:00 PM

makes me shiver.......well done!