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Winter Scene

I look at a completely still landscape The trees, bushes, lawn and path Seem covered in whitewash For Rick’s Winter kimo contest

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Poet. Undertaker

Date: 6/19/2013 2:31:00 AM

great! can visualize your picture. great

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/18/2013 10:49:00 AM

snow the purest of white, while your wonderful poetry, the purest of this art..

Daver Austin

Date: 2/17/2013 10:05:00 AM

Yes. I can see it, the sun giving it a liquid sheen. good stuff. Love, daver

Constance La France

Date: 2/16/2013 7:28:00 AM

Jack, a lovely Kimo, just beautiful, and best of luck in the contest, constance

David Williams

Date: 2/15/2013 12:32:00 PM

Jack excellent, good luck...David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2013 5:35:00 AM

Lovely written, Jack .... Hope you had a nice Valentine's day. - - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2013 12:05:00 AM

now this is SOUPER duper!!! Love how you did your kimo, my friend.

Patricia Lewis

Date: 2/14/2013 6:30:00 PM

A beautiful description of a lovely wintery atmosphere and recalling how winter used to be when I lived in New York. But not missing it though. Simmplissity = Patricia Lewis

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/14/2013 4:58:00 PM

That describes my world up here perfectly Jack; we haven't had this much snow for years so maybe the weather controllers are leaving us alone this year. Great entry for the contes andbest wishes. Love, Lizzie

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/14/2013 3:52:00 PM

lovely!

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/14/2013 2:32:00 PM

Lovely Kimo, Jack. perfect imagery. Best wishes for the contest! Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2013 2:03:00 PM

Very descriptive of a scene..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your chilled scene today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/14/2013 1:35:00 PM

This is a brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I loved reading about this winter landscape that you so illustriously described! What a creative piece, Great Work!!