Winter Girl

It often seems my young life was mostly winter..a few brief memories of the sun, the swimming hole and my mother's pies. But mostly, I remember wind and rain and loneliness.
I never liked myself....looking in the mirror was painful . I constantly felt I was trying to
make something, and had nothing to work with. My brother wore a golden halo, and I was blinded by it.
 
winter's bare branches
reflect the icy moonlight
the gardener waits

Slowly my winter to turned to spring.  I was able to see my reflection in the eyes of others. "Not So Bad!" I heard them say...My hands were no longer empty...and I lived life with a vengeance. The gardeners that tended my blooms opened a new world to me  as I turned toward the sun.But deep inside the winter girl lurks and she will always be my shadow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/12/2013 6:49:00 AM
Very creative way to go in the contest..I like the comparison of the unbudded young lady to winter and the budding young lady to spring blooms..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2013 10:46:00 AM
Barbara, Congratulations on your winning "mixed up poem." Have yourself a nice day~ :-) xox~PD
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Date: 2/6/2013 9:58:00 AM
We all have our winters tucked inside...I like the gardener that tended the buds in the garden. Enjoyed the read and congrats on your win !!
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Date: 2/6/2013 3:49:00 AM
Big congrats once more Barbara luv xx
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Date: 2/5/2013 6:39:00 PM
Hi Barb, I would have loved for you to work a bit more on the line layout. I adored the content and boy to I hear you. Please next time put cut markers in the haiku [--] Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/5/2013 6:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/5/2013 5:00:00 PM
This was such a sad, melancholy, of growing up as so many girls do. What a wonderful writer you are! It pulls at every young girls heart! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/5/2013 4:31:00 PM
Well done, congratulations.
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Date: 1/25/2013 10:41:00 PM
Great writing. Should be a winner. I have been struggling with this contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/25/2013 5:35:00 PM
This is a fantastic write my friend! I truly loved reading this fabulous poem this evening! What a meaningful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/25/2013 5:06:00 PM
Soup mail Light & Love
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