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Winter Blues

A few snowflakes signal the winter With it comes the deadly cold wind Keep warm by the fire, not to shiver Only hearing the music of the wind. The mind will get covered by depression As the land covered by avalanche in snow Winter comes not singly but in battalion Using all the blues there’re that it knows. Blue for water, ice, clear or cloudy sky Health, diseases, obese, other such woes If a single, or divorced or the spouse awry It’s blue winter making one blued if so.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date: 12-10-13 Seventh Place Win Contest: Winter Blues

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Date: 12/30/2013 8:01:00 AM
Wonderful write, but i hope your never down my friend.take care Pete.
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Date: 12/12/2013 6:39:00 AM
Beautiful verse! I always enjoy reading your expressive and impressive poetry Always, Laura
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Date: 12/12/2013 2:38:00 AM
I love the relation that you've explored here, nicely done.
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Date: 12/11/2013 8:49:00 AM
Excellent piece, Dr. Ram. The cold of winter can surely creep into a person.
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Date: 12/10/2013 7:10:00 PM
Hi Ram We are getting close to nature, not a bad thing Well written well composed Cheers Brian
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Date: 12/10/2013 6:31:00 PM
Dr. Ram You took blues to a different level! My compliment on this splendid creation! chuck
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Date: 12/10/2013 4:35:00 PM
I think that some people do suffer a depression in the wintertime. Personally, I love the solitude and the beauty that the winter brings. I enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon. Great work! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the encouraging comments on my latest poem. I appreciate it!
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:56:00 AM
Blue is the color of winter, of cold, and of depression sometimes.......I hope you are feeling as sunny as gold. Happy Holiday, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:13:00 AM
Hi, Dr. Ram, I really like this one. You chose a good style in which to present a blue Winter.
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Date: 12/10/2013 7:36:00 AM
So much is described about Winter in your lovely poem ! Good luck in contest , i'm sure this will be a winning piece ! ....Saanvi :)
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