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Winter

dark and cold, wet and grey these are the traits that you display. wind, rain, hail and snow you inhibit anything to grow. miserable and dark, you love your art on and on you”ll march you”ll be hated, cursed and debated and yet you”ll have your way. when your time is up, your portfolio fulfilled when you have to give way you will be followed by lovely spring all will be gay. days will be filled with song and dance and summer nights seem endless. harmonious sounds of birds and bees, even flowers seem to dance. all will be good, we”ll jump with joy but how soon we”ll forget that days from now you will return and only shadows will be left. csd

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Date: 9/18/2013 2:15:00 AM
Winter is so glorious. You do this season justice. I loved reading this verse. Excellent composition. Thanks for stoppin by. Always, Laura
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Claude Stanley Damoney
Date: 9/18/2013 6:10:00 AM
thanks for the read, even more for the comments.
Date: 9/17/2013 8:22:00 AM
I don't much like winter myself. Ours is not too harsh though, since I live in a Mediterranean region. I've never seen snow in my life and would never want to. I like your descriptive language. Licia :-)
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Claude Stanley Damoney
Date: 1/22/2018 11:34:00 AM
if ever you return, your poems are amazibg.
Date: 9/16/2013 9:16:00 AM
Hi Claude, wow..I wish for winter... I don't mind the gloomy imagery... love the beauty, till the end... happy and cheerful.. xox~ Linda
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Claude Stanley Damoney
Date: 9/16/2013 1:04:00 PM
thanks Destroyer, im sending winter your way!
Date: 9/16/2013 6:19:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice poem - I'm not too fond of winter, it is dark and cold .... and very loooong winter in Norway - Have a great week, in love and peace! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Claude Stanley Damoney
Date: 9/16/2013 7:40:00 AM
Well thank you for the comment, winter is my favourite season. I owed it some words. Thanks again.

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