Winter

WINTER will it never end? (this question from projection) a stark scene indeed – world in this awful white shroud, memory of spring erased but courage my friends bountiful spring will return in its old glory for now a shoot breaks the snow nether gods have awakened!

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Nefretiti Morant

Date: 4/21/2013 2:11:00 PM

NICE :-)

Donna Jones

Date: 4/7/2013 7:36:00 PM

Very nice again Daver .... by the way I like your name...I've never heard it before..

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 3/25/2013 2:41:00 PM

Sounds like the winter blues have climbed out of, "this awful white shroud".:( Been a while since we'd had this much snow here. Will be so nice for everyone, when "shoots break the snow." Daver, do you have maple cabanes near where you are? Keep well...love, Mikki :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2013 8:16:00 AM

.... No, here are still frost and snow .... I long for spring and sun. - A lovely poem Daver. - I wish you a nice weekend. / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2013 12:15:00 AM

oh yes, I love how you put in those nether gods. Spring is coming very soon, Daver. I know this will make you very happy!!

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/19/2013 11:48:00 PM

Just as well about their awakening Dave, i am just about at the end of my tether" good piece on the elusive thing..'er i mean spring Hope we get there in the end!!