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Wine Garden

stroll with me through hallowed halls embrace the ebb and flow the many traces of fate are but embedded faithfully the shroud has been lifted all the hidden faces are revealed the trance I bind you in shall never be discarded the youth shall play as the world spins freely

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/8/2009 12:09:00 PM
Of the 7 or eight of your poems I've read, I found this the most compelling to my travels in Europe. I seem myself in a medieval graden on the Rhine of in the Alsace Lorraine area of France. Beautiful imagery communicated here. Thanks for this. ~<><
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Date: 11/8/2009 11:53:00 AM
this is a good one
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Date: 2/18/2009 4:08:00 PM
This is a gorgeous poem. It's short... but it leaves you breathless, and I LOVE the last line.
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