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Wind Swept Mountains

Scalding winds, cold as ice, burn away frozen layers. Drawing raw, unbidden scars, upon the rugged spires. For the contest, Show Me Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Bl Devnath

Date: 1/11/2012 2:01:00 PM

Congrats on your superb win. Loved it. bl

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/11/2012 10:47:00 AM

Stunning imagery with a few line Paula, congratulations on your win :) love Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/11/2012 6:10:00 AM

Congrats on your win!! always Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2012 5:30:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Paula. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/10/2012 10:44:00 PM

A great picture painted in a few words. Congratulations Paula

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2012 9:42:00 PM

wow, it's short but very powerful in its imagery. COOL congrats, Paula.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2012 6:51:00 PM

CONGRATS PAULA ON FIRST PLACE WIN .. AN AWESOME ENTRY MY FRIEND.. HOW U BEEN?

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/10/2012 6:13:00 PM

Starkly fierce. Congratulations Paula. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2012 5:19:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading into the depths of your thoughts..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/10/2012 11:06:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this afternoon Paula and wish you the best in the contest. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/9/2012 8:46:00 PM

Very awesome great natural visualization poem! You said a ton in such a short amount of space! I love your descriptions of what wind will do, very imaginable by your words! Awesome Work!!