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Wind Coming Through

wind said to the dust move out of my way i'm coming through written 6-21-11

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Date: 11/13/2011 4:09:00 PM

And how true..! well put James:)

Date: 7/9/2011 9:06:00 AM

Ouch to the dust. I love this piece. Great write indeed!

Date: 7/3/2011 1:33:00 PM

LOL, lovely witty piece, James

Date: 6/27/2011 6:49:00 PM

And then it blew it straight up into my face, my hair and my eyes. The wind is a playfuol little nymph. Good job here my friend. God Bless, JB

Date: 6/27/2011 12:20:00 PM

your poetry must be the wind because it is deffinately coming through, you seem very gracious at hand, beautiful poetry here james

Date: 6/26/2011 7:27:00 PM

Nice short poem! I am not sure it is a haiku but I like it. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Date: 6/26/2011 12:54:00 PM

Got that one correct..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara

Date: 6/25/2011 6:29:00 AM

Very nice personification here..enjoyed.