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Wind Chimes

wind chimes gently blown by zephyr's cool morning breeze... coyotes' pups whine
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Contest: Any Haiku Will Do Written July 2013

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Date: 7/22/2013 11:47:00 PM
sara, I really enjoy this one and the contrast of the pups' cry with the wind chimes. congrats for your win.
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Date: 7/22/2013 12:55:00 PM
I can hear these melodies Sara....congratulations on your fine win...
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Date: 7/22/2013 12:01:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in this haiku Sara.Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:51:00 AM
Sara congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/22/2013 1:16:00 AM
- A winning haiku, with great quality Sara !! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/21/2013 10:57:00 PM
Such a soft scene. Lovely. Many congrats.
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Date: 7/21/2013 8:13:00 PM
Sara :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA**
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Date: 7/16/2013 5:22:00 PM
I love how you used the sense of sound in your haiku. I do love the sounds go wind chimes. I have four hanging in my backyard. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/16/2013 4:57:00 PM
Lovely one worded fantastically, enjoyed the read. Genius, loved always, bl
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Date: 7/16/2013 3:42:00 PM
Sara one of my favourite things are wind chimes. Good Haiku.Anne
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Date: 7/16/2013 10:50:00 AM
What a contrast in sound: wind chimes and whining coyote pups. I like it! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/16/2013 7:53:00 AM
This is a glorious write my friend, you have displayed a great amount of knowledge on how to write golden Haiku! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a powerful piece you have written here Sara, Awesome Work!!
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Date: 7/16/2013 6:38:00 AM
As stated below Sara..I love haiku and this is brilliant.Magnifique : ).How are you?Hope a bit better dear..hugs
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Date: 7/16/2013 6:08:00 AM
Brilliant in its simplicity! Truly enjoyed it this fine morning, Sara! Hugs, Jack xox
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