Will

Yes! I find my existence My desires, thoughts and my goal The smallest drop of liquid Rolls for long Move to live I want to be the smallest Waterdrop, So that I can make Another new earth New lives change emotions and feelings I can stick out my restless spirit Hard strike with a dead stone children in my lap But I dying of pollution! I will roam over the world Sing a song of lullaby Soft, Shapeless, Colorless, Stupid water drop

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Bl Devnath

Date: 11/1/2013 2:54:00 PM

Beautiful adoration on will, lovely done. Congrats, my poet friend. Loved always, bl

Skat A

Date: 10/30/2013 12:18:00 PM

wow..love this one ....love <3 SKAT

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/28/2013 5:11:00 PM

An interesting poem, Litan. Congratulations on your win! Well done!...Thank you for all of the great comments on my work!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/28/2013 8:12:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Litan

Joseph May

Date: 10/27/2013 7:51:00 AM

congrats on your win Litan

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2013 9:20:00 PM

Litan, , thank you for the support :-) CONGRATULATIONS, amazingly awesome win. Stop by my latest blog. If you's like or have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17074&PoetID=18720 ------ always~ LINDA ~

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 8:54:00 PM

Litan, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2013 10:44:00 PM

Litan, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/18/2013 5:18:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Litan

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/17/2013 10:57:00 PM

Thanks so much for this wonderful poem. I really love how you take that poor drop all over the place it is quite like science in its invasive quality. Unfortunately the contest requirements ask for the personification form. It's still a good poem despite the contest and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks much for entering my contest.

Litan Dey
Date: 10/18/2013 12:24:00 PM

Yea you are right dear....Thank you

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/14/2013 12:51:00 PM

Very expressive write and emotional. also thank you for your comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2013 8:15:00 AM

- A little different poem from you Litan .... but, I like it. - Well done! - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)