Widow's Walk

The rail is cold beneath her palms,
Fingers curling, knuckles white.
Her face is smooth, expression calm,
Stomach burning, heartstrings tight.
The wood is worn, the floorboards creak -
Pacing footsteps through the night. 
By raging sea, her tired eyes seek
A hopeful glimpse, a hopeless sight.
And in her mind, his face is etched -
A distant memory from this height. 
With hair blown back and arms outstretched,
She appears ready to take flight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 9/22/2015 7:07:00 PM
Heather, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2015 1:06:00 AM
Wonderful expressions Heather! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/20/2015 4:21:00 PM
beautiful yet sad imagery Heather many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2015 4:08:00 PM
Heather ,congratulations your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/8/2013 6:23:00 AM
This is myterious...it leaves a lot to think about...will she fly?
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Date: 12/23/2012 8:10:00 PM
Love it,,,,, reminds me of historical romance,,, which I used to read ;} Have a Merry Christmas Season ;}
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Date: 12/10/2012 7:04:00 AM
Absolutly breathtaking and heartbeaking, Heather...So glad I was lucky enough to run across your poetry...I'm a fan! - Tim
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Date: 12/10/2012 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM Heather love xx
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:55:00 PM
Heather, congratulations with your awesome win..in the Skitty Skat Contest.... thank you for everything. ~Always & Forever~ PD
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:28:00 PM
Congrats in my contest, . ~SKAT
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Date: 12/3/2012 6:25:00 PM
I like this poem, Heather, and the rhymes work well.
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Date: 11/15/2012 5:17:00 PM
great write Heather,love it,on the edge
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:07:00 PM
wow, what a vivid portrait of a woman "on the edge" well done!!!!
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Date: 11/14/2012 1:01:00 PM
I can just see this lady who is pacing hoping to see the ship come in with her man...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 11/14/2012 11:33:00 AM
this is well done. Your words paint the picture so vividly - JH
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Date: 11/13/2012 4:18:00 PM
Please don't jump! Wow a lot of emotions here, well done!
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