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Wide Blue Eyes

As she sits 'pon a Persian rug Her pet lovingly by her side This situation she can't shrug As she sits 'pon a Persian rug Frilly blue dress could've made her smug But virtue shows in her blue eyes wide As she sits 'pon a Persian rug Her pet lovingly by her side http://www.art.com/products/p13207418-sa-i2322685/briton-riviere-sympathy.htm Written this fourth of July 2013 Triolet Form One Stanza ABaAabAB/upper case letters repeat lines/ lower case rhyme only

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/5/2013 4:28:00 PM

lovely poem - will have to check out the pic, Sara

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/4/2013 11:17:00 PM

very nice Sara,,,, I check out the picture ;} thank you for reading my Autumn Birth. Happy fourth of July ;}

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/4/2013 8:16:00 PM

Sara, painted in words as lovely as the art. I posted a poem inspired by a painting "Halo of Grace.... :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/4/2013 8:12:00 PM

This is another brilliant Triloet you have mastered Sara! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening my friend! What a magnificent piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2013 5:27:00 PM

hey, you did triolet too. I have one in this form just posted! Great work, Sara.