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Wide Blue Eyes

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Wide Blue Eyes

As she sits 'pon a Persian rug
Her pet lovingly by her side
This situation she can't shrug
As she sits 'pon a Persian rug
Frilly blue dress could've made her smug
But virtue shows in her blue eyes wide
As she sits 'pon a Persian rug
Her pet lovingly by her side

Written this fourth of July 2013
Triolet Form One Stanza
ABaAabAB/upper case letters repeat lines/ lower case rhyme only

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  1. Date: 7/5/2013 4:28:00 PM
    lovely poem - will have to check out the pic, Sara

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 11:17:00 PM
    very nice Sara,,,, I check out the picture ;} thank you for reading my Autumn Birth. Happy fourth of July ;}

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:16:00 PM
    Sara, painted in words as lovely as the art. I posted a poem inspired by a painting "Halo of Grace.... :)

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:12:00 PM
    This is another brilliant Triloet you have mastered Sara! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening my friend! What a magnificent piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 5:27:00 PM
    hey, you did triolet too. I have one in this form just posted! Great work, Sara.