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why me

wat happen
who is this
this man he's at my door
standing there wanting and waiting to explore
explore things that i adore
i dont know what he want 
i dont know why he is here
all i know is that he just appeared
standing there dark and sexy
this is kind of weird
he say he want to talk
talk about what
i should have know 
he wanted my butt
this man that i dont really know
comes back again what the hell for
me being in need for good conversation
let him in
tell me your thoughts whats going on
now was it my fault that he's not happy at home
he's a real man as far as i can see
i didnt think that he was just a wana be
he was kind and very sincere
2 months later he's calling me dear
oh what the hell i wasn't looking for this
but my heart melts from the touch of his kiss
now im screaming i love daddy each and everyday
we didnt know it was going to be  this way
 8 months later im losing his kid a one night stand that was
taken too far 2 1\\2 years later now we have grown apart
i never meant to let  him in my heart
it hurts so bad whats a girl 2 do
just want to let his wife know
i never meant to hurt you
i know that she loves him but
i do too. 

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  1. Date: 12/20/2010 11:55:00 AM
    Wow. Your emotions are really put into this....damn...wicked piece.

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 7:34:00 PM
    very powerful words here my friend strong in the meaning thank you for sharing your works with me

  1. Date: 12/7/2010 7:30:00 PM
    This piece has potential. You made a bunch of grammatical errors which is a minor detail. What I really like about it is that you really put your emotions into the piece. Now on a side note. I know it's hard to do the right thing, but the right thing here is to let that man go. Otherwise confessions will only serve to make things worse.