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Why I Hate You

You utter words that are so mean that I felt like shedding tears You have gestures that makes me feel bad that makes me feel anxious ...and I hate you for that. You call my name in sweetest way that I could hardly speak You smile with all your heart that always left me stunned. ...and I love you for that. You all had it all showing me the worst I have and letting me realize the best i always had that makes me feel great and proud. ...and I adore you for that. But I know you don't feel that much for me You'll never have a chance to think about me You'll never have time to spend with me 'cause you have her enough for you. ...and I admire you for that. ..but for letting me feel special ...I really do hate you.. 2013-02-10

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Date: 11/11/2013 9:05:00 AM
Oh yes, I enjoy very much, just made a few suggestions to make it more in line with English translation, but I love the intent and feeling. I hope this is ok. I would have sent this as a message, but don't see how.
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Date: 11/4/2013 2:54:00 PM
The imagery and feeling are very strong here, intense. Nice. Some suggestions?: first line: "Is" should be "are"
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Charmane Bellen
Date: 11/10/2013 1:21:00 PM
thanks a lot my dear..hope you enjoyed reading despite of so many flaws in my grammar :)

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