Get Your Premium Membership

Why

The deep valleys form my attire Roads on which you easily tire Hold my burning heart’s warmest fire My heart, a shallow cry Raw emotions, a silent pyre We met, oh why, oh why Tahera Mannan 03/07/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/12/2011 11:54:00 AM
Wow! Exquisitely presented thoughts with truly "raw emotions," Tahera. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 7/12/2011 6:40:00 AM
Tahera, Great job on yournear the top winner. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 7/12/2011 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations Tahera on your win in the "Rime Couee" contest of Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 7/11/2011 4:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 7/11/2011 2:58:00 PM
Congrats Tahera!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/11/2011 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations on a great form and win. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 7/11/2011 2:09:00 PM
Congrats Tahera my friend on a fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv..in new form..
Login to Reply
Date: 7/11/2011 1:54:00 PM
My congratulations on the second place win in my contest, Tahera
Login to Reply
Date: 7/7/2011 11:27:00 AM
A moving write here Tahera...very touching.Best wishes.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/6/2011 10:00:00 PM
This one seems full of sorrow, Tahera. It seems full of deep emotion! HOw are you, sweetie? I think I have not seen a lot of you lately!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2011 7:03:00 AM
oh so touching .. so dramatically penned and still asking for reasons why Tahera my friend.. so sweet... great entry for the new contest..good luck.. rhyme is so perfect my friend.. happy 4th .. fireworks sent to u from USA..luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2011 6:47:00 AM
Interesting work..Read regret about a love here..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2011 6:38:00 AM
Strong Poetry this morning.... very good.... Michael
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs