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Who's Out There Still?

Purple nebula gas insignia finds a polished glass astronomy class here on earthly sod. Pluto ice ball now a rogue moon White dwarfs sun fall burnt out too soon. Lenses peek. comets streak. Say to me. You see no God? Odd...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations Gerard on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/6/2010 6:15:00 AM

LOL if there was "something" so large that from the matter of which it was comprised it could create a UNIVERSE do you think a or an "entity" us, could make an instrument with the ability not only to see up, into, through, out the otherside & peer backward to look at it, could be made? If it was made it would not be a telescope for that would only show the interior (some of it;) This may be called Verse/or Rhyme/ not free verse because it contains TOO much rhyme

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 12:54:00 PM

Congratulations on this wonderful write, Gerard

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/17/2010 9:10:00 AM

A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/17/2010 7:50:00 AM

nice one , congrats on your HM

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Gerard in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/17/2010 12:18:00 AM

Gerard congrats on your placement in Rick's contest :) Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2010 3:23:00 PM

Congrats Gerard on your HM in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece my friend..enjoy your honor tonight with luv...

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/16/2010 2:39:00 PM

This is one of my favorites..your ended it perfectly. BG congrats.

James Fraser

Date: 9/16/2010 1:30:00 PM

Congratulation's Gerard on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 12:58:00 PM

You know, I heard that Pluto is now no longer considered a planet, Gerard. Scientists sometimes see things differently than the rest of us as they look through their telescopes, but I have no doubt that God created everything. Your last three lines are very thought-provoking. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 6:15:00 PM

good one , is it for the contest? good luck if so