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Who Taught Me

Strange thoughts wander inside, Unable to figure out the past, A clear big bang blast, Or does in there something else reside, I learned to walk, Step by step till I was about to fall, Listening to your call, I learned slowly to talk, Painted religions taught me fires, Burning individuality alone, A shabby harsh tone, Taught me to suppress my desires, A cute smile taught me to wink, Raising my ever dying hope, Amazingly my mind still wandering in globe, Searching - “Who taught me to think”.

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Date: 9/14/2024 4:52:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 4:27:00 PM
Diwakar Pokhriyal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:46:00 PM
DIWAKAR, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 6/22/2013 9:46:00 PM
I really love this. It says so much. You talent is clear. :)
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Diwakar Pokhriyal
Date: 6/23/2013 12:34:00 PM
Thank you so much :-)

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