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Who Knows Where the Time Goes

The stars may wink their last goodbyes, the sun may disappear, the moon may shrink and come to naught and I will shed a tear. The universe may turn to dust all flora, fauna waste away, we may spend our time in darkness hoping for a brand new day. Will you still be here to comfort me to fill my eyes with pride, and swell my heart with tenderness, my love, my blushing bride?

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/7/2013 12:13:00 AM

Awesome write Keith, my mom used to say that all the time,,, where does the time go ;}

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/6/2013 8:22:00 PM

You want to go through that again Keith? I know the feeling too but better to dream about it and leave reality alone. Wonderful rhyme and adoration in this. Love, Elizabeth

Donna Jones

Date: 3/6/2013 6:45:00 PM

Oh you will never be in the dark alone with a romantic heart like that....

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/6/2013 3:14:00 PM

Of course your bride will still be there with you through it all my friend, as mine will stay with me! Your write you have written here is wonderful, a perfect example of a brilliant poem, written with such perfect rhythm and rhyme! Your poem flowed with ease, I was able to fly by it with naught an unwanted break in flow! And what you wrote about, surely a wondrous and meaningful subject, time lends it brushed hand! What a delightful and incredible piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2013 2:35:00 PM

Let's hope that does not happen ..... very well written,Keith! - thank you for sharing your thoughts - I love to hold your hand, if it happens. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)