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Who Is That?

Looking at her beautiful face So soft and full of such grace Glancing through her eyes, deep into her brain. Just enough to see she is only half sane. Seeing her lips, one bigger than the other. She doesn't care, because it reminds her of her mother. Checking out her nose, there is a bump in the middle. Loving it because she has had it since she was little. Reading the fierceness in her brilliant eyes. I would know her, even if she was in disguise. Feeling her personality when she walks into a room. Leaking all the beauty like a young rose at bloom. Wait, I think I know the person looking at me. I am so very happy, I am so full of glee. It is very hard to see her. Wait, its me thats in the mirror. By: Cherica Eckiwaudah August 25, 2009

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Date: 10/27/2009 10:24:00 PM
That's personality, Cherica Lynn! Well written...Keep writing! And thank you for your comments...Gert
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:25:00 PM
Uhmmm.... this one is perfect! No one can understand the way you can, so feel proud that you are here in this world and praise yourself every step that you take.... I bet you are very beautiful, just like these lines.... may you live long and with beauty, with each passing day!
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Date: 9/17/2009 5:19:00 PM
very nice cherica glad too see you have a very high self esteem
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Date: 9/3/2009 7:37:00 PM
Truly the sign of inner confidence. what in the past may have been viewed as a flaw (you lip observation) is now a sense of character and uniqueness. I myself am a spot on replica of my father when he was in his mid twenties. It's a surreal experience seeing old photos of him. Thanks for writing this. Brought back some memories in me. -Yoni
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:44:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fabulous poetry today Cherica. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:38:00 PM
Interesting description of self. Sara
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:35:00 PM
Beautiful poem Cherica, nice to read you again...Raul
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