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Who Is She

She is so and very pretty And a bit too witty She has a bright smile Making every moment worthwhile She brings out from me a side Too good for me to hide I'm under her lovely spell When did she cast it? I can't tell But I do know how Known a long time ago, not now She did it with her eyes Them, with magic, she dyes Their power incredible Making her irresistible Her overflowing hair Its beauty, too much for me to bear Enters the mighty fate Just when things are going great I lose my memory, my mind Information I can't find To my condition there is no cure They say its cause I'm poor But I know someone in front of me I know her, but who is she? Poet: Ali Akl Contest: Romance Sponsored by: David Williams Date: 25-12-2011

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Date: 12/26/2011 10:03:00 PM
Quite intense Ali-Great build up and nice way to end it. I think David will like it. Good luck to you :)
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Date: 12/25/2011 4:19:00 AM
Maybe.........love?.........a angel?...... Well written Ali. hugs from Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/24/2011 6:33:00 PM
Smile ˜ The heart is aglow, shoots up through the stony ground ˜ Love can be like this sometimes when tilled through time amid the soils rich in, purity * Great collab in this reflective looking glass perhaps of such ˜ Merry Christmas ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜
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