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Who Is She

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Who Is She

She is so and very pretty
And a bit too witty
She has a bright smile
Making every moment worthwhile
She brings out from me a side
Too good for me to hide
I'm under her lovely spell
When did she cast it? I can't tell
But I do know how
Known a long time ago, not now
She did it with her eyes
Them, with magic, she dyes
Their power incredible
Making her irresistible
Her overflowing hair
Its beauty, too much for me to bear
Enters the mighty fate
Just when things are going great
I lose my memory, my mind
Information I can't find
To my condition there is no cure
They say its cause I'm poor
But I know someone in front of me
I know her, but who is she?

Poet: Ali Akl
Contest: Romance 
Sponsored by:  David Williams
Date: 25-12-2011

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  1. Date: 12/26/2011 10:03:00 PM
    Quite intense Ali-Great build up and nice way to end it. I think David will like it. Good luck to you :)

  1. Date: 12/25/2011 4:19:00 AM
    Maybe.........love?.........a angel?...... Well written Ali. hugs from Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 6:33:00 PM
    Smile ˜ The heart is aglow, shoots up through the stony ground ˜ Love can be like this sometimes when tilled through time amid the soils rich in, purity * Great collab in this reflective looking glass perhaps of such ˜ Merry Christmas ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜