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Who Built These Walls

I always thought I'd break my hand on this enclosure This space with everyday renewed it's grasp My shaking voice gave nothing but a wail And the walls that held me in were rising fast And up, the gate that rose and gave no passage And up, the flag of hell beside my soul While everyone who knew it shook their head There were none to help a wretch who'd lost control No visitors would come to see such horror Where the marching band of life had lost its beat Mists of cooling rain had whispered freedom But never could I recognize relief Outside the walls, the people laughed and loved While I wondered why my place with them was taken Yet everyday the same bright sun was rising And everyday it promised liberation Desperately I shook the walls and asked them "Who is it that cages me each day?" With a howl they replied, "You are the builder! Take us down yourself, or we will stay." by Kyle Ezra Kriticos

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/12/2015 8:55:00 PM
You breathe new life into a well-worn theme. For whatever reason, among a wealth of warmth, I especially resonate with "no visitors would come to see such horror Where the marchig band of life had lost its beat" Nice visiting your citadel.
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Date: 11/9/2011 5:10:00 AM
another 7...You're KILLIN me with the Quill for REAALLL!
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:32:00 AM
Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Kyle. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:15:00 PM
you write what i find hard to express. i will never be as good as you kyle. i love your work.
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:09:00 AM
I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Kyle. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:46:00 PM
Your poems make me realize things I sometimes come to neglect. I like this! Thanks for your kind comments, Kyle! I wish you nonstop inspiration to write more beautiful poems. God bless!
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:07:00 PM
our own worst enemy. The chains that bind a person are sometimes put there by the individual. great read.
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