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Who Are They Trying to Impress

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Who Are They Trying to Impress

Who Are They Trying to Impress?

A cross between the bride of Frankenstein
And the Dalmatians’ Cruella De Ville
See teens walking at malls; glad they’re not mine
Absurd appearances give me a chill

Parents with tattoos ride on a Harley
Leather coats and gloves cut off at knuckles
Sprung from these roots that appear so gnarly
Teens upstaging their folks give me chuckles

Written for John Freeman's Boisterous Comedy Contest

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  1. Date: 8/23/2011 12:39:00 PM
    I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 4:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Diane. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 3:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Diane

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 10:09:00 PM
    Thanks for the honor of your poem's class in my contest Diane, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 5:21:00 PM
    hey Diane congrats on a great win David

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 4:39:00 PM
    Congrats Diane on a wonderful win with this witty write .. enjoy ...

  1. Date: 8/18/2011 8:01:00 AM
    Thus be it ever so. Tony