Who Am I

Somebody help get through this nightmare,
If im not the real me
Who have i become
And who am i really,
This is so confusing
I cant escape this hell
All from the abusing,
Im so lost 
Does anyone care,
No longer the same
Is anyone there,
I rise just to fall again
Im falling apart
How do i come undone
Here in the dark,
Whats real and whats not
Whats left of me,
In this big overwhelming knot.
Who do I auta be,
Who am i not,
Do i change n be the real me
Or do i become someone else
who am i  suppose to be
If only i knew what cud have been
Who and what i would become
If not for the abuse
If i wasn't undone
My brain has been played with too many times,
I try to figure out things
By writin' em rhymes,
Im tired,
Tired of feeling so confused 
Tired of feeling so awful 
Tired of being abused.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/22/2013 12:41:00 PM
Hi Viki, "Welcome to the poetry soup. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest -- I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer on this site. Please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far.. Hoping to become a follower and a friend to your poems, and persona. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 6/20/2013 8:58:00 AM
wow, Viki, Viki, this is a powerful poem, you speak in... hopefully you pull yourself from these feelings. your poem is perfect and captures the right confused emotions... your poem is awesome, and a perfect 7. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/20/2013 5:06:00 AM
Hey, Viki ! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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