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Who Am I

He is here
He is angry
He is attacking
He wants to kill us
Shaking the house
Ripping up trees
Blowing out windows
He is here
He is awesome
He is beautiful

He is gone
He is dying
He will be back
He has many names
Sun is shining
Gentle breezes
All is at peace
He was here
He was awesome
He was beautiful

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  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:01:00 AM
    Tim, I love how you wrote this, with short succinct lines. Made it more dramatic. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:12:00 PM
    wow, Tim, I really like this. First time I saw it, I think. Well deserved win. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 9:01:00 PM
    Nice write on Fredrick, Tim. Congrats on your win. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:24:00 PM
    Great way to go with the contest..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:11:00 AM
    TIM, congratulations with your awesome "Weather Forecast" poem in Joy's contest... have yourself a good day :-) Love PD

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 6:56:00 AM
    The fierce beauty of a storm :-) Congratulations on your win, Tim. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:59:00 AM
    Belated congratulations once again, I am sorry these are late I am busy packing and shopping for my holidays xx

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Joy's "Weather Forecast" contest Tim. Love Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 3:56:00 AM
    I enjoyed your take on this contest Tim. Nature in all forms is beautiful, stirring up all kinds of emotions. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:55:00 PM
    Nature's fury - it's pretty darn awesome to watch (from a distance). Nice piece.

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:30:00 PM
    YIKE!!! yes there have ferocious beauty. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:18:00 PM
    I remember that hurricane, it was a bad one! This poem was very wonderful my friend! A very nicely written piece! What a powerful and dynamic write this one is! I loved this poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 2:55:00 PM
    Good day Tim, wow..Fredrick is quite the guy, who did not come in silently. A very touch image to accept, when the thunder and heavy rains are in effect,, but the after effect can be a glimpse of beauty, if you love nature.. enjoyed your entry, good luck. One other thing Tim, your comment on my "stillborn" means a lot to me. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt thought that moment. I had to endure myself the pain at an early age... You take care now,, xox~pd

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    typo,, tough,,, not touch... xox
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 2:49:00 PM
    Yes it will not be the first time and he or she will come time and time again over time. Nicely done. love phyl