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White Silence

Winter coats proliferate, the earth is stilled by snowflakes slowly drifting, swirling, shifting, sifting down, like a whirling, curling cloud of white confetti. ...an exercise in assonance and alliteration.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/13/2013 4:45:00 PM
A perfect potrait of winter. I enjoyed this..! :))
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Date: 6/5/2013 6:38:00 AM
you've got it Keith and a lovely scene as well. We have the summer yet to experience before the fascinating snow. xxx's ooo's, Kathy
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Date: 5/22/2013 7:05:00 PM
Fantastic alliteration. Love the imagery and word craft. Superb talent :)
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Date: 5/21/2013 11:03:00 PM
yes, I was drawn by alliteration and assonance before I even saw that footnote you did!!
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Date: 5/21/2013 3:59:00 PM
i had as much fun reading this as i'm sure you did writing it!
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