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White Noise

Fierce white noise fills my pained head Extreme barbaric measure What has happened to my mind No song left to sing Time elapsed from loud noises The orb delivers bright light Too bright to see very clear Piercing to my soul I’m closed, never to rise up My blind mind sears from the heat Never saw what was coming Bashing of the noise Tears flow down with fire trailing Pain fills every part of me And I die with every breath With no life to live White hot is the strength of noise Bleaching my mind beyond hope I won’t see clearly again May time heal my mind
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/21/2013 8:07:00 AM
I am sooo impressed, my friend! This is an extremely well written poem...kudos! You write poetry... I write silly stuff. I can only hope to write as creatively as you! Cheers, Jack
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Date: 1/20/2013 7:36:00 PM
All that noise will be captured by His opened Hand. In one whoop. Descriptive write, Russell! Peace!
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