White Blossoms

white blossoms 'pon ginger's branches~pleasant scent... whipped by the fierce wind

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2013 12:21:00 AM

Love the imagery of this one.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2013 2:01:00 PM

- With your pen you have painted a beautiful picture, Sara ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2013 8:06:00 AM

wonderful haiku Sara...

Yvette Lisa Ndlovu

Date: 9/18/2013 1:30:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku! Are the blossoms symbolic of the purity we have as children, which is taken away by life`s experience and growing up? Well, that`s how i took it:)...that`s what I love about Haiku`s, they are so open to interpretation and full of meanings in just a few words. ^_^ -Y.L.N

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/17/2013 5:32:00 PM

The beauty and scent of such delicate flowers don't seem to last long, come autumn. They are gone with the wind, so we must enjoy them while we can. Beautiful poem, Sara!...Thank you for the nice comments on my poem!

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/17/2013 9:43:00 AM

You capture nature's beauty in this succinct work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2013 7:07:00 AM

lovely haiku Sara, a refreshing scent, wonderful imagery.. hope the leaves are hanging on... :-)...Linda

Victor Nwabeke
Date: 9/21/2013 1:18:00 PM

...and sent into furious gyrations. Nice piece