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Whisps of Spring

The Maple's leaves have turned amber Paired Doves whirr in flight Tiny green tips the Pecan Trees Great puffed clouds in sight The Catbird dives for pool's water Bumblebees buzz with might Seeking some sweet nectar rare As my spirit soars to heights

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/20/2013 2:53:00 AM
so sweet and fabulous written.. i like this piece so much :) thank you dearest friend Sara for sharing <3 wishing you a very best weekend <3 Sk
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Date: 4/18/2013 3:34:00 PM
a beautifully depicted scene, sara!
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Date: 4/18/2013 3:22:00 PM
in between the strong storms.
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Date: 4/17/2013 8:53:00 AM
My goodness! You defined the core of Spring fully here. I want to play hooky from work now and go play outside! Thanks so much for this! :)
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Date: 4/15/2013 10:02:00 PM
A spring beauty Sara....
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Date: 4/15/2013 8:30:00 PM
This is awesome, a totally grandiose write my friend! You have written a glorious and harmonious poem! I loved reading this nature inspired piece this evening! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/15/2013 10:40:00 AM
just had to let you know i came by after a long leave from soup.. lovely art-piece, sara.. did one on spring just now.. how are you?... missed you and your poetry...:) huggs!
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Date: 4/15/2013 10:13:00 AM
A beautiful and well written poem Sara, thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/15/2013 8:47:00 AM
Good morning Sara, a love whisps of spring in action. Maple leaves, I love the amber color.... As a matter of fact my hair is Amber-Red at the moment... but, no where does the color pair in flight with the lovely imagery in your poem. I am thinking your love for nature is GRAND... a high soar Mrs. Sara... I'm a big fan of your poetry.... always~ Linda
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