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whispers in silence

What keeps me awake
When the cool breeze bears whispers of things to come
Promises to be fulfilled on the morrow?

Is it my joyless moment of cognizance
knowing that this stagnant night ripples from no real breeze
Only imagined promises birthed on the whims of a longing heart?

Yet, what keeps me awake
is not these dreams of flattering winds
but it is this night of lifeless branches and unrifled leaves
the lack of real whispering winds taunting my heart
What truly keeps me awake
Is the silence of tomorrow.

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  1. Date: 8/26/2010 9:40:00 PM
    I just gotta fav this one!

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 9:39:00 PM
    This is awesome.I am so glad I came and saw it here tonight. Congrats. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 12:02:00 PM
    wonderful poem, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 9:17:00 AM
    Fear for the future keeps me awake as well, Samir. This is a very intuitive poem! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 4:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Samir in Paula Swanson's contest "Your Existence". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 9:43:00 PM
    Your poem is very beautifully written and deserves to be in the winner's circle. I am so happy to see it was chosen. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 8:43:00 PM
    The silence of tomorrow. Very intrigueing. Congratulations on your top ten win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 8:14:00 PM
    Congrats Samir on your winning poem in Paula's contest with this rare beauty.. enjoy a sweet victory tonight..with luv..

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 11:04:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Samir. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol