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Whispering Night

In a strange environment under gross darkness and whispering night,I found myself with a companion. We walked an endless journey across the woods..eerie sounds we heard,a crack! then the undead resurrecting from marshes,we ran seeking for cover. These creatures howled as they drew near with blood dripped mouths,my fear deepened,I called out to my friend a flesh eater he became. Under the whispering night I stood alone, seemed the world stood still,as these monsters encircled me,I closed my eyes wishing I was not born. Suddenly,a bright light shone,dispersed darkness,repelled these zombies-then eerie noises ceased, and the world revolved once again. A knock,I realized I drifted to sleep as my companion entered my car. We zoomed off towards the horizon under the bright sky. Name:ifeanyi B. Ekechukwu. Date:24/10/2013

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Date: 12/8/2013 4:38:00 PM
Maybe I said wrong about it winning more than once. But it looks like this one was recently judged. It well deserves a win!!
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:37:00 PM
gosh, this one is winning lots of contests in a short period of time. BIG congrats to you again!!!
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Ifeanyi xx
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Date: 12/7/2013 4:57:00 AM
Congrats on the win,
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Date: 12/1/2013 8:39:00 AM
draws you in its a little scarey Bob good pen Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/30/2013 6:10:00 AM
That was a nightmare..I liked the ending..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2013 5:06:00 AM
good poem Ifeanyi congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:54:00 AM
congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:37:00 PM
Bob, , Congratulations on your win. take care ~xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:10:00 PM
Never go near Zombieland without a companion. Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:48:00 PM
looks like it won another contest. Big congrats.
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Date: 11/20/2013 4:53:00 PM
Bob. Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love
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Date: 11/20/2013 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on the win,
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:04:00 AM
- Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem Ifeanyi !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations my very dear friend I. Bob on your super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/13/2013 7:19:00 PM
I love the horror and the suspense in this poem! Amazing writing, Bob! Really good work!...Many thanks for the great comments. I appreciate it very much! :)
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Date: 11/11/2013 8:58:00 AM
Congrats on your great win, Bob! All the best my friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 11/10/2013 3:08:00 PM
hey, this is a really neato poem on zombies. I see it won too. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/10/2013 1:05:00 PM
stopping by to wish you congratulations on your fine win :)
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Date: 11/10/2013 12:43:00 AM
Congrats on the win,
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Date: 11/9/2013 5:13:00 PM
Bob, Congratulations on your awesome Halloween win. Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 11/5/2013 6:21:00 PM
wow...you tell this zombie tale well...scary stuff, very well written poem...good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/5/2013 8:54:00 AM
Wow! Great creepy write my dear friend! Can't help not to comment although I've read our very dear friend PD's comment below. So, this is for my contest? ;))))). Thanks in advance! thanks so much as well for your kind visit and lovely comments on my poem. Have a grace-filled day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/31/2013 12:28:00 AM
Nice one Ifeanyi. God's light in us will always disperse darkness...Kechi
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Date: 10/30/2013 9:30:00 PM
Hello BOB, wow.... loving this eerie, and awesome... wishing you luck in sweet Leo's zombie contest... LINDA
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