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Whisper Hello

Sweet flower tree whispers hello Walking past she interrupted... Glorifying wings of spring on her branches Marveling her purple paper star shower Inhaling her peaceful unlocked power My spirit has lifted.... "Hello, I whisper back, "Thanks for interrupting!" ^(How a tree made me feel today)

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/18/2009 1:10:00 AM

Jane, I love the imagery. If we indeed look at the surroundings, inspiration comes. Yes, there is an isnpiration from the trees, from the air, from the flowers, from the bees and butterflies. I love your poem. Ernilando

Michael Chapman

Date: 3/24/2009 5:55:00 AM

do u gather your creativity from things around you because sadly most of my poetry is from love and relationships ,truly the earth is bound to be my muse.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/20/2009 9:17:00 AM

wonderfully in tune every moment with nature, trully a magical way to live! great! Jim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2009 7:38:00 PM

How wonderfully you describe the tree's power to lift your spirits! What a great source of inspiration they provide, don't they?

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/19/2009 4:31:00 AM

This is beautiful personification..love how the tree come alive..well done.

Brian Strand

Date: 3/18/2009 6:46:00 AM

Such beauty in this image Jane 'her purple paper star shower'Excellent Rgds Brin & thanks for your welcome observations

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/18/2009 2:07:00 AM

They do that, don't they? a beautifullly perfect write for a tree. love, Kristin

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/17/2009 6:40:00 PM

Awesome! It is wonderful how nature can lift the spirit! Love the imagery. Smiles from Lolita