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While I was standing near My Autumn tree

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While I was standing near My Autumn tree

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While I was standing near My Autumn tree The Sun was fading, with all its grandeur and beauty, Somewhere far, very far away amid the Poplar trees. I was in a state of enchanted stillness, Beholding the gold which was showering on me, With every gush of wind coming from the east. The earth was wrapped in a lovely darkness, Slowly the Sun rays slipped away from the hands of the evening, but It embraced the night in her arms perhaps to console its forlorn heart. I was glued with the fragrance of Autumn, while the Sun was still fading slowly, Leaving only a yellow and radish glow in the sky. The golden leaves of Poplar were still falling on me, Coming to me while flying from the Poplar tree. Suddenly the birds said adieu to me, reminding me once again the passing of time, While I was standing near my Autumn tree. Ravindra Kanpur India 4th Sept. 2011
Poem submitted in honor of Brian Strand's contest SEPTEMBER-YOUR CHOICE

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 9:25:00 PM
    Hi Ravi, Okay...yellow and radish sky and beyond the gold which was showering me...pure radiance of words and imagery...I don't think a tree has been adorned with a poem as lovely as this one...lucky poplar adore thee! A new favorite for sure! Thanks for this experience!

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 12:54:00 AM
    Ravindra, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 12:00:00 AM
    Rereading this one and reminded of its pure beauty! One of your best!

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 6:05:00 PM
    Enchanting verse for the mind to absorb. Your soul shines in this lovely verse Ravindra, It is very special.

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 5:25:00 PM
    as always elegance graces your creative pen Ravindra my friend.. thankxx for sharing and for your ever special comments on my poetry.. we both relish in vast imagery and expression.... one day a collaboration in the future perhaps friend..luv..

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 9/14/2011 10:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It would be an honor and a great pleasure too for me, my friend. I will write a Poem on Nature; if possible I will support it with a Photo & would send it to you. You then sketch your wonderful words to make it a unique association and finally we publish the Poem and the Blog with that unique Photo. Hope this new great idea of making something different would be liked more by others….Ravindra
  1. Date: 9/11/2011 4:35:00 PM
    Such a beautiful and tranquil scene depicted in your poetry Ravindra. I hope your poem wins the contest.

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 11:17:00 PM
    enchanting and mesmerizing lines of beauty and tranquility in this scene so vivid and vibrant Ravindra my friend.. a pleasant trip into Nature from your creativity luv... we just arrived home from preparing to move next week..oh little time to read poetry lately ..thankxx for your gracious comments always..

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 9/9/2011 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your always precious comments. Hope your vacations were great. Love and best wishes ... Ravindra
  1. Date: 9/8/2011 10:28:00 PM
    A splendid atumnal write, Ravindra. I sure do hope you have entered it into one of the fall contests?? I think it would do well with Brian! Nice seeing a new poem from you recently!

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 9/9/2011 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea my friend for your precious advice and for your kind comments. Love and best wishes. Ravindra
  1. Date: 9/7/2011 12:49:00 PM
    i really like reading this poem. You create such a vivid imagery. Well done, kel.

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 7:17:00 PM
    ===Smile, *^_^* “Sweeet Poe My Dear Precious Friend & Yesss, I Could Feel You Here *^_^* Let Em Rock, Let Em Roll, Let The Preacher Man Come & Save Your Soul *^_^* Thanks for Stopping By & Stay Beautiful!” === My Love Unto You & Yours, Always & Forever, Jasper *

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 9/7/2011 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for all your unique comments. I think some change in the themes of Poem is always necessary to keep the flow more effective. Love and best wishes...Ravindra
  1. Date: 9/6/2011 6:59:00 PM
    Smile, *^_^* “Jackie Sits Back & Collects His Thoughts for A Moment, Scratches His Head & Does His Best James Dean * Says Hey, Let's Run Off to The City, Diane Says Baby, You Ain't Missin A Thing * Ow Yea, Life Goes On, Long After The Thrill of Livin Is Gone *^_^* Little Diddie About Jack & Diane * Two American Kids Doin The Best They Can....” === Cont} *

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 2:48:00 PM
    Dear Ravindra, the time you spent beneath this trea seems like the passage of a lifetime right up till the moment when finally, the birds say farewell. This is more than a picture of one day, but a portrait of a lifetime. Bless you for sharing it with us. Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 11:08:00 AM
    excellent write and good poetry. you captured the moment beautifully.

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 9/4/2011 11:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you my friend for enjoying these beautiful moments with me. Ravindra