Where the Wind Blows

Over where winds blow, my Love waits for me
Even when zephyrs blow a bustling breeze
His outreaching arms beckon come let me see
Join me in my castle where you'll live with ease

Out on the porch listening to rain's soft sounds
There's no wind, leaves and limbs hang limp silent
Over where winds blow, my love knows no bounds
Contained it now seems ~no wind evident

Just a slight breeze will stir blossoming rose
Her scent a delight floating 'pon spring's breeze
Rose's scent entwines with honeysuckle's prose
Racing to where the wind blows, my love to please

Over where winds blow, He waits for just me
With outstretched arms, He calls come commune please

Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle
Contest: Where The Wind Blows
Written this 18th day of May, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 10:00 AM
You always write from a peaceful place Sara .. congratulations
A   Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 9:48 AM
Good morning Sara, this is a very pleasing poem... glad to see it on Gail's winning list.. xox~Linda
May Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 7:06 PM
congrats on a great win Sara
Bacha Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 9:34 AM
Hi Sara, love your poem. congratulations. Love Terry xoxo
Maharaj Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 6:44 AM
Beautiful :)
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May 20, 2013 at 4:40 AM
- Sara, this is a poem I really cherish! - Soft and beautiful thoughts and words. - You will surely win - good luck! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Horne Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 12:00 PM
beautiful sonnet, my friend. congrats on your wins
Onclaud Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 4:08 AM
very fascinating write here, sara... soft words and gentle feeling throughout the poem...my favorite lines came in the 3rd stanza... so lovely!..:) huggs
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May 18, 2013 at 3:33 PM
I am now relaxed after reading this delightful write my friend! You have entertained me with calmness and tranquility with your amazing poem here Sara! I truly loved reading this harmonious piece this afternoon, this is such a grand poem, Great Work!!
Bacha Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 11:29 AM
Hi Sara, this is a winner, so beautiful and so relaxed one feels after reading your poem. As if your state of mind is ao relaxed. Hope so. Love T. xoxo a 7>>> & FAV.
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May 18, 2013 at 10:31 AM
'Rose's scent entwines with honeysuckle prose'...Favorite line among many in this elegant sonnet, Sara...Reads like a sure winner - Tim
De Burca Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Beautifully captured images in your poem, a delight to read.
A   Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 9:21 AM
Sara, a very pleasing and soft images.. very graceful and worth the journey.. I love the sonnet. Hope you are fine :-) Always ~LINDA
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