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Where the Wind Blows

I followed one day a spring breeze at play. It seemed not to know where to go. And aimlessly, I - like a butterfly - meandered with it to and fro. Among bright blue bells, it tired a spell. Recovering, it picked up speed. Alongside a rill, I ran with a thrill just to know where the breeze might lead. My heart filled with song as I danced along, careening through meadows of green. And then the breeze dove into a large grove, the loveliest I’d ever seen. No longer a breeze, it whipped around trees. It whistled while beckoning me, and as it passed through where tall redwoods grew, I was following, wild and free. In that beautiful place, it changed its pace and got stronger, for the breeze goes where sturdy trees thrive. I felt so alive! I have been to where the wind blows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/21/2021 6:05:00 AM
What an amazing write! Marking it as a favourite for a re-read later!
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Date: 4/15/2018 5:20:00 PM
A beautiful uplifting write, Andrea.
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Date: 6/16/2013 12:38:00 AM
great poem. really from the heart. really took me through the wind great! great!
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Date: 6/8/2013 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea ..knew it would be here...well deserved top win!
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Date: 6/7/2013 9:49:00 AM
Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) this is a very pleasing poem... glad to see it on Gail's winning list.. xox~Linda
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Date: 6/5/2013 7:53:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Big congratulations.
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Date: 6/5/2013 4:56:00 PM
You write some beauties Petal, and this way up there with the best. Congratulations on this win. I have been out a while so if you have other wins congrats on those too. Take care, Richard
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:25:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 6/4/2013 2:39:00 PM
This is as light as a spring breeze!! Lovely and delightful !! Congrats to you !!
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Date: 6/4/2013 1:22:00 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea..... beautiful piece
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Date: 6/4/2013 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations Andy, found you in your rightful place xx
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Date: 5/30/2013 12:30:00 PM
Simply wonderful!! The intricate rhyme scheme, the gorgeous descriptions. Very well done :)
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Date: 5/30/2013 11:20:00 AM
A well expressed feeling of the euphoria that you feel within. Love the flow of this poem, Andrea. Good luck to you on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 5/27/2013 5:05:00 PM
Love it, love it, love it ;} Was out playing ball with my g-daughter yesterday, A tree started blowing & I ask her who do you think is passing thru that tree ;}
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Date: 5/26/2013 11:16:00 AM
Andrea, this piece has a way of drawing the reader in and making them feel that they are also carried along with the wind, uplifting and beautiful my dear! Hugs
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Date: 5/24/2013 8:50:00 PM
A beautiful, picturesque piece, Andrea! A pleasure to read! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/23/2013 10:20:00 PM
LOVE THIS! Such an optomistic and light piece, so JOYOUS. Hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 5/20/2013 7:32:00 PM
charming. D X
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:07:00 AM
I see a winner her girl , just love it xx
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Date: 5/20/2013 6:27:00 AM
I have been to where the wind blows too through your journey above and im spell bound.Enchanting and beautiful. andrea i have trouble openinf the poems by poets page..I had to search for you.through 'my fav poets'Ow gee everytime something happens which makes it unpleasent to get to my friends posts and am having error 500 when trying to open the poems by poets page.Anyways im glad i managed to visit your post by other means..take care.
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Date: 5/20/2013 6:19:00 AM
Breezes, groves, and meadows...you know I love it! And you were right about hunting or something....close...was fishing. :)
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Date: 5/19/2013 1:02:00 PM
Magical integration of words passes great feelings of energy and vibrancy. A pleasure to read Andrea. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/19/2013 11:52:00 AM
lovely write, congrats on your wins, my friend
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Date: 5/19/2013 10:54:00 AM
Beautiful quill. I believe this my favorite piece will do well in the contest. AO
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Date: 5/19/2013 10:02:00 AM
Clem Potts was dreamed up simply for something to post. I, reluctantly, decided what the hell. LOve, daver
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